Wednesday, July 15, 2020

The Flower Not Seen Comments

Rating: 5.0

The flower not seen but imagined
Is so rare and radiant.
It's presence in my consciousness.
Makes we want to abandon language.
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Shaun Cronick 15 July 2020

It's what life is all about and neatly wrapped up in your fine poem's closing line, 'The fiery spirit still glows.' A poem where nothing is wasted, every word fits so perfect to its companion. 10++ and added to my favs. Keep writing Dominic, for your style and enigmatic deliver are truly timeless.

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Bill Cantrell 15 July 2020

Excellent poetry! ! Fallen realities are mere shadows compared to edens original oneness...a poem of hope! Great work! !

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 July 2020

the flower flower of the spirituality is unseen can spread its aroma overall the world divinely

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