The Flung Pennies Poem by Daniel Brick

The Flung Pennies

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When you ask me what time it is,
which is rare, I answer, "It is the
time of Love's Middle Age, when
desire gives way to mutual comfort,
and fulfillment showers us with
more hopes fulfilled than we
thought possible." You seem unconvinced.
"Well, there may be an end we don't see, "
you reply. "There may be a big twist
in the road ahead, and we know nothing
of it -.""I am troubled by your fear,
dear. There could be low-lying hills,
and we will reach a moderate summit, and
read our futures in the lay of the land."
You are silent for just a moment. "Oh, you
and your optimism! Look, here are four shiny
new pennies in my hand. I'll fling them
into the fountain. The sunlight will enhance
their polish. Choose one and I will give you
a fortune-telling free of guile. Free of hope
as well. A perfect balance sheet, don't you think? "

Monday, August 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Brookes 21 August 2018

Great piece what poetry should be

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Daniel Brick 21 August 2018

Wow, Paul, that is a wonderful thing to say about short lyric poem. I wanted to write just a snippet of a conversation, as if you overheard only a few lines.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 August 2018

Daniel, such a wonderful poem....10+++

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Daniel Brick 21 August 2018

Thank you, Bernard. I purposely kept this poem short. Hopefully, the two people say enough in just 21 lines to give you a picture of their friendship.

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