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The Forever Of You

Rating: 4.5

The forever of you
Is in between all I do...
In a passing field of flowers
In the morning sky,
You are to me, a soft
Enchanting lullaby.
You are ever in my thoughts;
Oh! the clamor that invades
The empty spaces
When we are apart.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 19 April 2015

a lovely poem, Dorothy. Thanks

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Twilight Whispers 11 April 2008

This is a lovely poem, you make us understand your feelings in so few words. Thank you for your comments on my poem. -TW-

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Iris Washington 22 March 2008

I Love this poem. So sweet.

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Elena Sandu 19 April 2015

So happy to find you on the first page dear singing Dorothy! More of your poems deserve to be here, love the gentle way you warm the hearts with the most beautiful lullabies! Thank you for sharing, always a pleasure to read your poems!

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 20 April 2015

I am so excited to have had my poem chosen for the first page. Thank you for your lovely comment! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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Michael Gale 24 March 2019

DOROTHY THIS POEM ENDEARS TO MY HEART, HOPEFULLY THE REST MY BODY WILL FEEL, WHEN I ENTER INTO MY PEACE FILLED SLEEP, THEN FINALLY INTO A PAIN FREE NEW BODY, WITH JESUS CHRIST AND GOD, GOD BLESS US ALL, US CHILDREN OF GOD! ! ! GREAT POEM INDEED BY A GREAT POETESS! ! !

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Michael Gale 24 March 2019

DOROTHY, MAY GOD BLESS YOU AND LET YOU REST IN PEACE! ! ! I WISHED I'D BEEN AWARE OF HER PASSING A YEAR AGO! ! ! GOD BLESS DOROTHY! ! ! THE ANGELS AND JESUS CHRIST NOW SURROUND YOU WHILE YOUR BODY REST'S IN PEACE AND SLEEPS FOR NOW! ! GOD BLESS YOU IN YOUR SLEEP FILLED REST! SINCERELY MICHAEL JEFFREY GALE! ! !

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 15 November 2018

Beautiful poem sir.....Really I like this poem.....10++++++

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Pratik Rajani 01 September 2017

Nice one you may like my poem sun and planet

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Paul Reed 21 March 2017

...the empty spaces when we are apart. Short and meaningful, I liked this a lot.

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