Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

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The Forever Of You - Poem by Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

The forever of you
Is in between all I do...
In a passing field of flowers
In the morning sky,
You are to me, a soft
Enchanting lullaby.
You are ever in my thoughts;
Oh! the clamor that invades
The empty spaces
When we are apart.

Comments about The Forever Of You by Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

  • Pratik Rajani (9/1/2017 1:20:00 PM)

    Nice one you may like my poem sun and planet (Report) Reply

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  • Paul Reed (3/21/2017 9:48:00 AM)

    ...the empty spaces when we are apart. Short and meaningful, I liked this a lot. (Report) Reply

  • Hadil Diaf (5/18/2016 10:02:00 AM)

    It is just marvelous, great job! (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/26/2015 10:42:00 AM)

    Nice work with the muse of nature. Nice thought. (Report) Reply

  • Seema Jayaraman (11/15/2015 12:04:00 PM)

    lovely poem, bound together in love, its unbearable to be apart.. thanks for sharing.. (Report) Reply

  • Ovi-enita Odiete (9/29/2015 6:09:00 AM)

    A very beautiful and enthralling Poem... (Report) Reply

  • Pamela Sinicrope (9/7/2015 4:24:00 PM)

    Pithy and beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • (5/2/2015 7:46:00 AM)

    Perfect words of love you ring out parting is such sweet sorrow with a loving lilt...thankyou and regards (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2015 7:42:00 AM)

    I like the simplicity of your flow and the mastery of your thought. I rate it 10/10... (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu (4/19/2015 6:54:00 PM)

    So happy to find you on the first page dear singing Dorothy! More of your poems deserve to be here, love the gentle way you warm the hearts with the most beautiful lullabies! Thank you for sharing, always a pleasure to read your poems! (Report) Reply

    Dorothy- A. Holmes (4/20/2015 11:03:00 AM)

    I am so excited to have had my poem chosen for the first page. Thank you for your lovely comment!
    A Poet Who Loves To Sing

  • Francis Lynch (4/19/2015 10:32:00 AM)

    Especially enjoy the economy of words, and the minimalistic approach. (Report) Reply

  • Brian Stafford (4/19/2015 9:27:00 AM)

    congrats on the poem and getting poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/19/2015 4:51:00 AM)

    congratulations for the poem of the day. Saying that you are ever in thoughts it sounds very pleasing. Wonderful poem shared.10. (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (4/19/2015 3:54:00 AM)

    Young Lady, I do believe this site has chosen a most polished and eloquent poem to begin this early Sunday morning in April...I'm back here on PH...PF really became a FREAK SHOW...of the 3rd Kind! ! ! I can't operate under such an infantile & counter productive environment...Besides, all, or the mass majority of our Inner Circle is long gone, probably for the same reason as I boogied....Hope all is well in your world missy! Keep in touch, and while you're at it...consider a move over here...Your skills & contributions are sorely needed & will be surely welcome...Frank (Report) Reply

  • (4/19/2015 2:04:00 AM)

    A good and lovely try this is with a beautiful ending. I rejoice at the beauty of the diction that is seen all through the poem.

    Luis Estable
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  • Kelly Kurt (4/19/2015 1:07:00 AM)

    a lovely poem, Dorothy. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • (4/11/2008 10:40:00 AM)

    This is a lovely poem, you make us understand your feelings in so few words.
    Thank you for your comments on my poem.
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  • (3/22/2008 10:12:00 AM)

    I Love this poem. So sweet. (Report) Reply

  • (4/5/2007 6:54:00 AM)

    What a beautiful way to put such beautiful thoughts and feelings. A wonderful poem

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  • (4/5/2007 5:31:00 AM)

    Beautiful just beautiful poem... Dorothy..10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 5, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 10, 2011

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