#93 Poetry In Motion These Hands Poem by Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

#93 Poetry In Motion These Hands

Rating: 2.8


These hands hold small bowls
Of muted laughter
Rising with soft edges
Against the sky




August 12,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Gale 24 March 2019

NICE, VERY, VERY NICE, FOR SURE! ! !

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Adeline Foster 25 May 2016

Almost a Haiku, still well done. Read mine - To Lander - Adeline

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Short but significant my friend!

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Elena Sandu 21 April 2015

Wow! Masterful pen, filling such a little space with words to overflow entire world with smiles! Lovely read!

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Shelbie butz 15 August 2008

wow such a short poem with a powerful message. very creative.

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