#93 Poetry In Motion These Hands Poem by Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

#93 Poetry In Motion These Hands

Rating: 2.8


These hands hold small bowls
Of muted laughter
Rising with soft edges
Against the sky




August 12,2008

Friday, August 15, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: august,laughter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Gale 24 March 2019

NICE, VERY, VERY NICE, FOR SURE! ! !

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Adeline Foster 25 May 2016

Almost a Haiku, still well done. Read mine - To Lander - Adeline

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Short but significant my friend!

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Elena Sandu 21 April 2015

Wow! Masterful pen, filling such a little space with words to overflow entire world with smiles! Lovely read!

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Shelbie butz 15 August 2008

wow such a short poem with a powerful message. very creative.

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