Gert Strydom

Gold Star - 25,761 Points (03 April 1964 / Johannesburg, South Africa)

The Forsaking (Canzonetta) - Poem by Gert Strydom

(after Sir Thomas Wyatt)

She whom once did me seek flee away
and it is somewhat kind of strange to me
that something did change and she cannot stay
as if I have some kind of iniquity
while she hides behind a sweet kind of guise
and it is very strange this sad awakening
comes as a sudden kind of dim surprise
as there is much pain in the forsaking

and in the morning’s bright new day
she does continually want to be free
even the kind of music that she plays
has a kind of rebellion that I see,
when I do touch her, her arm hairs do rise
and all of this has me worried and thinking,
makes me cry right up to the red sunrise,
as there is much pain in the forsaking

and I will have her right back if I may
but that is not how things are going to be
while to another lover she is set to stray,
want to make me for her sake feel guilty
and to want her back, to stay is unwise
but terribly my heart keeps on aching
and of her intents I can just surmise,
as there is much pain in the forsaking.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

[Reference: “The lover showeth how he is forsaken” “They flee from me that sometime did me seek” by Sir Thomas Wyatt.]

Comments about The Forsaking (Canzonetta) by Gert Strydom

  • (10/9/2013 4:09:00 AM)

    You use the dative incorrectly in the first line.and sorry, I prefer the original! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 9, 2013

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