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Space Haiku’s

Rating: 4.5

Satellite observe
mist cloud unexpectedly
reactor flaming.

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Big eye satellite
look at our activities
on the sandy beach.

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Big space telescope
tuned fine on solar system
looks for small angels.

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The white moon hangs sickle
above the bright morning sun
in the dull blue sky.

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An eye peeps far off
and telescope watch blue sun
in very dark place.

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A black round circle is
a blue ring in photosphere
in glamour photo.

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The moon eclipses with
copper red colour burning
next to dull blue star.

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Blue-white glimmering
diamond ring impress in
eclipse of the sun.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Mc Creath 23 September 2015

Haiku's have a way of carrying us on a floood of thoughts. These show you have been captured by what you saw in space. I enjoyed them

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A creative and captivating composition!

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Very nice series of space haiku...

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Colleen Courtney 30 April 2014

Agree with Sunprincess! Is women need to stick together!

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