The Fourth Generation Poem by Marianne Reninger

The Fourth Generation

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It seems a Quixote Quest
This Fourth Generation Flight,
Antennai twitching, wings barely
Moving the heavy air;
Traveling the hundred mile days
To the Secret Place, the place of endings,
And beginnings.

Despite pesticides, herbicides, and parasites,
Drought and fire ants,
Heat and Hunger,
They press onward like an ' Orange Battalion'
Seeking their victorious Claim,
Survival, Migration.....Marianne Larsen Reninger

The Fourth Generation
Sunday, January 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: butterflies,migration,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It takes 4 generations of Monarch butterflies to make their trip to the jungles of Mexico from North America. See Marianne's sold painting, which incorporated this poem at www.pinterest.com, Marianne Reninger, marianne's art board
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 24 January 2016

Some time back I read an article on Morarch butterflies winter migration to Maxico. I was so fascinated with it. Enjoyed reading a poem about it.

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Pamela Sinicrope 20 January 2016

WOW! You attached your art. LOVE IT! I enjoyed visiting your web page and seeing what you've done. I started imagining what you would do with POETRY AGAINST TERROR. That would make a really cool collage. This is an interesting art form I am not all that familiar with, though it fascinates me.

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Pamela Sinicrope 17 January 2016

I will visit your painting. This whole butterfly migration is fascinating. I've only seen photographs, but also read about it in Barbara Kingsolver's book. I love your opening line, use of simile (orange battalion) , and alliteration. You conveyed much with a modest number of carefully chosen words. Thanks.

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Pamela Sinicrope 17 January 2016

I had trouble getting to your painting. Can you post a pic here on PH with your poem?

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Marianne Reninger 17 January 2016

Have to give it to Kingsolver for the orange battalion line; yes, her book was exciting especially for someone living in the Appalachians. Thanks again Pamela

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