Mamaw tells the story of how it used to be,
In a special time and special place
When she was a kid like me.
'Imagine a shady grove of trees, under dark branches I do sit;
Overhead are little fruit umbrellas, and
Blue skies can barely peak through it.
Bees buzz and sunlight streams down,
Like dusty ribbons of dancing light, that
Sweep to the mossy green ground.
My mouth begins to water, sweet cherries hang up high.
I must get a wooden ladder, and climb clear way up to the sky!
My Daddy says, 'Caution; don't you slip and fall.'
I place the ladder carefully, and then I become so tall!
I hold my pail so firmly, and the handle I do swing.
I fill it up quite quickly, and sweet cherries I will carry
To Mama, who will tell me, always the same old thing.
'You eat more cherries, than your pail will hold, and a stomach
Ache they'll bring! '
Other kids loved the sparklers n fireworks from July the Fourth,
But I loved Fredonia, N.Y. and our cherry adventures up north! '
(An exerpt from 'Spitting Seeds Chronicles')
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Love the title 'Spitting Seeds Chronicles.' Such beautiful imagery that brings back cherished childhood memories using all of the senses. Your writing is musical and crafted like an artist.
Thanks Jette. Spitting Seeds Chronicles are a group of childhood memories waiting to be written, of which this is #1. Energy and ambition necessary, and comments like yours which, of course, becomes the incentive! Thanks so much....
I love this poem and writing in the vernacular of children is perfect. I just read a poem about cherries by Merwin and loved that one too. There's nothing I don't like about cherries. Your poem is wonderful and its well written.. Thanks for sharing. What is 'spitting seeds chronicles? ' That's a great title.
this is such a vivid childhood memory, that I dreamt I'd add to it, so hence, the imaginery Spitting Seeds Chronicle! Marianne
Ah yes! Whimsical and with that innocence that rings true and not fabricated. The folks from Frosni's anthology sure have a keen eye for good poetry.
This is a poem written for and in the vernacular of children. The memories are real....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Oh yes, those mouth watering sweet cherries will forever live in your memories. Nice 5*