Phil Soar

Gold Star - 48,147 Points (28.06.1952)

The Gym - Poem by Phil Soar

The lasting impression, from my first fitness session
Made me believe I was dying
If I thought that these sounds
Would have shed several pounds
I’d have thought it a worthwhile obsession

Topic(s) of this poem: life


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  • David Wood (9/2/2015 6:46:00 AM)


    I've got my own gym and personal fitness trainer, she's a yellow Labrador called Clara. I hve to take her for long walks rain or shine. I went to a gym once and nearly died knackered for the rest of the day. Brilliantly worded poem that says everything in so few words. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 2, 2015



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