The Haiku Poem by Ari Alsio

The Haiku

Rating: 4.8


The yellow light
lifted to clean them now
with a cold heart

Tuesday, October 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Agatha Eliza 21 October 2015

I like the contrast between the warmth of the yeallow candle and the cold heart. Exquisite verses!

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Ari Alsio 21 October 2015

Wonderful answer and comment, thank you very much Agatha Eliza.

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Rahman Henry 06 October 2015

Very sound Haiku. Lovely.

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Ari Alsio 06 October 2015

Thanks, Henry

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