The Haunted Sea (Kids Stuff) Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

The Haunted Sea (Kids Stuff)

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Two days of stark
on a wide, wide sea.
Into bleak horizons
the ship sailed free.

Through day filled nights
and flightless skies
of lonliness
and tearless eyes.

Then the sea grew wider
as the sky shone pure
with painful sharpness
and silent fear.

Soon fore to aft
the ship did spin,
and the sails they emptied
then filled again.

It listed port
then starboard, right
and overturned
in the haunting light.

No sound, no sound,
from the tossing waves
for the drowning men
were the waters slaves.

And the crew still shriek
when the wind is flying.
it's loud with the sound
of brave men dying.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Richter 24 February 2015

Oh my! Miss Sally I find you quite talented, such a momentous way you have.... Stay blessed dear...

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Sally P. P. 16 August 2019

Thanks for your interest, John, best regards. Sally

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Wow. I really liked it. the inner kid in me enjoyed the read. Love; D

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Sally P. P. 23 March 2020

Thanks for your comment. Most welcome, Denise.

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nomad omnia 15 November 2009

'...the sails they emptied, then filled again..' I could feel the ship shudder at that point (as did I) . Reminds me of my owm 'kids stuff' days. Good one, Sally

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Patti Masterman 05 November 2009

Oooh, I like it very much (don't worry; I'm still a kid inside here) ..(smile)

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Sally P. P. 23 March 2020

Thanks for your communication. Very much appreciated.

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Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
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