The Hidden God Connect Us Poem by Rajendran Muthiah

The Hidden God Connect Us

Rating: 5.0


Wherever I go, I carry your smiles in mind,
to make me happy and cheerful in life.
O my deer! On 28th Feb, you are so kind
to come with your eyes rife with sorrow
from the opposite end with face turned to right.
You hid your face for a long time;
when a chance came, you ignored me
and refused to respond to my craving looks!

You know, I was at your left with begging eyes
for your fleeting glance, but your ire
made my mind engulfed in a pensive mood.
The reasons for which you hid your phone number
are the same for which I don't ask of you.
In a minute I can get it from others
but I want it from my dear deer alone!

You conceal yourself from my deep close watch
and stop your sight at me for a fortnight;
but God is there to bring you in my view,
for keeping my mad, tired pen to write some lines.

Saturday, February 29, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 29 February 2020

A superb work on love! I find a brilliant depiction of love, emotions and personal stance of the poet in this beautiful poem! An adorable composition....Top score!

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Rajendran Muthiah

Rajendran Muthiah

Madurai District, Tamil Nadu, India.
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