Thursday, November 8, 2007

The Hogarth Experiment Part 7 Comments

Rating: 5.0

The first streaks for dawn
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David Harris
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Patricia Gale 21 November 2007

David, I wanted to leave comments after each part but I just could not give the moment away. I had to continue! Stunning work here! I loved the story and the thought and the end.... well it truly could make one think. BRAVO! Splendid penning!

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D, this has been an absolute masterpiece, for which thank you. Award-winning potential here for sure. t x

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Alison Cassidy 09 November 2007

David, I suppose you'd call this a science fiction parable (he he) and this one certainly provides food for thought regarding the irreversible danger of interfering with the genetic structure of life, even if from the noblest of motives. A wonderful story from the pen of a fine storyteller. Thanks. love, Allie xxxx

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Meggie Gultiano 08 November 2007

whew..at last..ha ha..my heart was always pumping nervously what will happen next..Oh, David, you are really a talent..what a write1 i cannot do this.. ha ha..thanks for the 7 nights reading this.. love, Meggie

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Francesca Johnson 08 November 2007

Phew! ! ! Now I can relax.....but are you sure there are no more queens or eggs left? Are you positive? ? I will be watching the skies.....he he. Love, Fran (exhausted but relieved) xxx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 08 November 2007

Well David, it's been a great read over seven nights, your a sci-fi freak my friend, the secrets out now to late every one knows.. lol.. Thanks for the read, fun as always..10

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Melody Rhymer 08 November 2007

That was AWESOME.....you should enter that into a short story contest I bet it would win....thanks for the fine read

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