The first streaks for dawn
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D, this has been an absolute masterpiece, for which thank you. Award-winning potential here for sure. t x
David, I suppose you'd call this a science fiction parable (he he) and this one certainly provides food for thought regarding the irreversible danger of interfering with the genetic structure of life, even if from the noblest of motives. A wonderful story from the pen of a fine storyteller. Thanks. love, Allie xxxx
whew..at last..ha ha..my heart was always pumping nervously what will happen next..Oh, David, you are really a talent..what a write1 i cannot do this.. ha ha..thanks for the 7 nights reading this.. love, Meggie
Phew! ! ! Now I can relax.....but are you sure there are no more queens or eggs left? Are you positive? ? I will be watching the skies.....he he. Love, Fran (exhausted but relieved) xxx
Well David, it's been a great read over seven nights, your a sci-fi freak my friend, the secrets out now to late every one knows.. lol.. Thanks for the read, fun as always..10
That was AWESOME.....you should enter that into a short story contest I bet it would win....thanks for the fine read
David, I wanted to leave comments after each part but I just could not give the moment away. I had to continue! Stunning work here! I loved the story and the thought and the end.... well it truly could make one think. BRAVO! Splendid penning!