The Hostile Brothers Poem by Heinrich Heine

The Hostile Brothers

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Yonder, on the mountain summit,
Lies the castle wrapped in night;
In the valley gleam the sparkles
Struck from clashing swords in fight.

Brothers they who thus in fury
Fierce encounter hand to hand ;
Say, what cause could make a brother
'Gainst a brother turn his brand ?

Countess Laura's beaming glances
Did the fatal feud inflame,
Kindling both with equal passion
For the fair and noble dame.

Which hath gained the fair one's favor ?
Which shall win her for his bride ? —
Vain to scan her heart's inclining;
Draw the sword, let that decide.

Wild and desperate grows the combat,
Clashing strokes like thunder fly ;
All ! beware, ye savage warriors!
Evil powers by night are nigh.

Woe for von, ye bloody brothers !
Woe for thee, thou bloody vale !
By each other's swords expiring,
Sink the brothers, stark and pale.

Many a century has departed,
Many a race has found a tomb,
Yet from yonder rocky summits
Frown those moss-grown towers of gloom ;

And within the dreary valley
Fearful sights are seen by night ;
There, us midnight strikes, the brothers
Still renew their ghastly fight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 14 December 2016

'Yonder, on the mountain summit, Lies the castle wrapped in night; In the valley gleam the sparkles Struck from clashing swords in fight. Brothers they who thus in fury Fierce encounter hand to hand; Say, what cause could make a brother 'Gainst a brother turn his brand? ' loved the fairytale start, guessed correctly the fly in the ointment, hope she was worth fighting over, always wondered why some women desire to be fought over?

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P1 Murder 101: A Crime Scene At The First Recorded Murder read the blood guilt murder in the Cain killed Abel genesis stories the killing is wounded jealousy over who has their God's favour not jealousy over who has a beloved lusted for woman's favour with a twist of fermented apple juice mixed into a simmering stew!

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P2 Murder 101: A Crime Scene At The First Recorded Murder spotlight Genesis brother hate anger jealousy brother killing brother while out in a field together Cain rises up against Abel smites him dead why did Cain murder Abel because Cain was evil Abel was righteous? a terrible Biblical Historical stage is set murder killing innocent blood!

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P3 Murder 101: A Crime Scene At The First Recorded Murder how did Cain murder Abel we drew a Bible blank no juicy details weapons spears swords daggers guns had not been invented yet did Cain smash Abel's head in with a stone strike him with a stick?

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P4 Murder 101: A Crime Scene At The First Recorded Murder perhaps Cain invented the club and clubbed his brother to dead it is a no brainer Abel is dead his blood cries out from death dust history brutal is infested with curse murder for countless violent years! Inspired by the poem 'The Hostile Brothers', by the poet Heinrich Heine. Dedicated to the poet Henrich Heine.

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Terry Craddock 28 November 2020

P2 A Fatal Feud Residue Of Fading Reasons questions errors creep in shadows wisdom walks wise in light... Inspired by the poem 'The Hostile Brothers', by the poet Heinrich Heine. Dedicated to the poet Henrich Heine.

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Terry Craddock 28 November 2020

P1 A Fatal Feud Residue Of Fading Reasons were they thinking with testosterone muscle not brain? upon their deaths did she mourn them indifferent or in pain? did she die a virgin virtuous or soon depart with another suitor? as for fallen two brothers fatal folly was it naught but life hate hate wasted?

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Terry Craddock 28 November 2020

Can An Anger Hate Feud Be Stopped? were Countess Laura's beaming glances young girl flirt glances? were they purity of heart a young girl's joy happy innocent glances? was Countess Laura enjoying ego attention or did she hate the feud? did she sincere attempt to dissuade two brothers from a moral deadly fight? Inspired by the poem 'The Hostile Brothers', by the poet Heinrich Heine. Dedicated to the poet Henrich Heine.

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P3 A Love Tempest Violent Left A Ruin Of Hate has dark time proved she was beloved worth fighting over? did brothers wonderer why women desire to be fought over? did she have a choice even want to evil desire be fought over? one wonders who of choice two brothers the beloved loved? did the brothers not think to ask her no in their vanity never! did she encourage conflict savouring a duel fought over her?

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Terry Craddock 27 November 2020

P2 A Love Tempest Violent Left A Ruin Of Hate still a brother feud curse blood spilt taints a dreary valley dare thee to venture out to view fearful sights seen by night as midnight strikes brothers hate still renew a ghastly fight love a fairytale start became curse fly in ruin feud ointment?

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