The I-M-Possible Dream Poem by Ritika Deborah George

The I-M-Possible Dream

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THE I-M-POSSIBLE DREAM

On an early morning flight, he came out bright
As the sun beamed his eyes gleamed
All he wanted was a stream to fly high.
A Dream that no one knew
He fought to make it new
Alas, he fell on Earth like dew.
Wilting, trembling like a sapling
He shredded, clinging, dreaming
Was this the ending?
With his cry, hues left the sky
The smiling clouds took a stand by.
Dark clouds nigh
The winds roared, the trees flowed
The rain was huge, everyone took refuge
When the rage pacified, a flush took a ride.
The sun shone, the flowers bloomed
The time was here to come out of gloom.
Tears dried, feathers were bright
With a pearl to the right, he sighed.
Strength restored, he took a strode
Went up high to the sky
Eyes sparkled; all he knew was to fly.
Skies to conquer, world to explore
This is his dream to fly more and more,
That sun may forget his glitter ahead his ‘briller'.

The I-M-Possible Dream
Friday, October 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,hope,inspirational,journey,victory
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is my first poetry which i had written after listening the story of a person who lost at times but never lost hope and worked hard for his dreams to make it true, still aspiring for more. For the same reason i have compared it with a life of a bird and since i dedicate my first composition to my inspiration, i have referred the bird as 'HE'. Moreover i feel somewhere its a story of all.Its all about dreams hope and never ending journey to heights.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 23 October 2018

i have referred the bird as 'HE'. Moreover i feel somewhere its a story of all.Its all about dreams hope and never ending journey to heights..... thank u for your explanation of your poem. thank u again. he sighed. Strength restored, he took a strode Went up high to the sky Eyes sparkled; all he knew was to fly. Skies to conquer......... let your conquering spirit soar inspite of storm and rain and darknights.......... tha nku for your determination dear poetess. tony

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 November 2018

Once Bruce said TRY AND TRY AGAIN You have now picked up the strain let come rain storm or tsunami you are a poet awami try and give hope to all you come across few gals r found like you I have gone the world across You have the makings of a baker of POETRY you will do well indeed make lovely poetry pastry all r in need

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Ritika George 19 November 2018

wow.. Thank you so much for your wonderful lines. In process of writing more, keep admiring, motivating and inspiring :)

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 November 2018

And, no dream is impossible

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Ritika George 17 November 2018

Indeed sir, that is why I chose the title which says I am possible :)

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 November 2018

Hi Ritika, Lovely poem. I remember a story I had read a kitty child, possibly in Readers Digest- the name was Jonathan Livingstone Sea gull, or something like that. It is about how the little bird learns to fly. How his mother encourages him on his first flight. Your poem reminds me of the story of Robert Bruce as well... Persevearance is the road to success.

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Ritika George 17 November 2018

I am happy that you can connect with my poem. Thank you sir

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Hidden treasure is exposed now. Wow Ritika,an excellent poetess.keep it up.God bless you.

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Ritika George 16 November 2018

Its all your blessings ma'am...I am happy to receive an appreciation from you. Thank you so much for reading

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Dave Walker 27 October 2018

A wonderful thoughtful poem.

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