The 'I' Volatile Poem by Pradeep Uthaman
The 'I' Volatile
I was designed to vanish;
and I know I have to.
I may hide in no where,
and I am sure I have to.
In the mornings to come,
You will not see me in the sun.
And the moon;
for me there are no nights to come,
I was calm unusual,
quite and more dissolved.
I flew entwined in memories;
so messy of my past.
Then I saw the pretty days -
where we fell in love.
And with every moments;
sank more deep into each other.
We saw them together-
the sun; the cloud and the weather.
And at monsoons, lightnings and thunder-
our fear melt down in our heat.
My evenings were red.
But still i loved them.
And I loved those twlights,
as she was with me.
One day clouds came to me;
and whispered that I am fragile.
Feeble and I am meant to break,
tender and I am designed to die.
Any other day remains;
for the sun to rise and the birds to fly.
And I wished to ride back to time,
and make everything alright.
But I was made to vanish;
and to hide in no where.
And to sail so far,
a voyage of no return.
One day we have to leave.
Think about the last day of our life, just a day before we complete the journey of our time and begins another one, unknown.
This is about an Uninvited Friend.
A friend who holds all rights to visit us any time with out our permission.
The friend who is a clown, an illusionist and is capable of vanishing us in to no where.
It finds its beauty in this poem, But remember, its always a business of loss, both for the seller and the buyer. But still we cannot abandon this trade.
So SIMPLY enjoy this poem.
Regards
Pradeep
14/07/2012
it's... GOOD... really good... too bad we are 'designed to die'.... but too good... we get the time live every day and every second of this life... with such beautiful people around us... :)
But I was made to vanish; and to hide in no where. And to sail so far, a voyage of no return. Yes indeed, beautiful interesting and deep, for me a joy the read, thank you for share.
This is really good! Sad and beautiful at the same time, and you are right we must leave at some point, but try to enjoy it while we can! ! !
Very nice. Kasia is right. You opened up a door the door of our minds. There is deep philosophy and at the same time a loveable solution too.Great, Invisible Man!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Very beautiful and the imagination of the truth is very powerful you have opened such door for our minds to visualize and embrace these moments. The fragile parts of us, the soul everlasting so much to emebrace in this beauty of a poem. Magnificent! Love, kasia Thank you.
Thank yiu for encouraging words