The Inner Journey Comments

The bats of fear in nocturnal loneliness The uncertainty of the ahead.... you have pictured the inner journey very well in wonderful words and expressions.... like your poem very much.... the title attracted me to read it..... thank you very much dear poet. tony

It's amazing how much meaning you wrest from that repeated refrain THIS THE TOUGHEST. It has staying power as a refrain must. A poem made up only of noun phrases with no elaboration might seem inadequate but so many of yours are finely, sharply drawn they are very resonant. They work! I especially like the first stanza with the dark lanes and the alley of faith conveying the sense of a spiritual as well as adventuresome journey.

Indeed, The Inner Journey is the toughest. Striving for ones future to exceed ones present and past is a journey that's fraught with many stumbling blocks. A beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

Wonderfully presented poem shared really. Nicely drafted and shared really.