The Insomniac Indian Poem by NAQUI AHMAD JOHN

The Insomniac Indian

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"The Insomniac Indian"


Down the white lofty ranges
In wet green fields
Along the ganges
Stood the convent
With frenzied fathers

"India is my country and I am proud
of..."

Till 90s it meant something
But now the father has lost his cane
And the cross bleeds again

Dripping drop by drop
Red blood clots into stain
Lofty whites linger the rain
Ganga slithering into pain

Dead dolphins, rising piers
Red shrouds, sinking pyres
Billowing smoke, hazy horizon
Where the mind is full of fear...
And the head droops low

The tryst with destiny keeps fretting
Didi and Gogo have stopped waiting
Hira-Moti as carrion stinking
Raju the Guide keeps misguiding
Shiva's noosy nose crumbling

Hindustan hamare Hamid is dead
"Eid Mubarak" tagged watsapped
Warm embraces torn in maslaks*
Shivering claybuddhas* extinct
Gas balloons on mobile screens
MPs on mosque gates
Beggars shooed away straight

Dropping birds under pale leaves
Dropping beads after chanting leaves
Dropping babe's in dark streets
Dropping boxes empty despite feats

India is my country and I want
To be proud of Its
Rich and burried* heritage

Oh Father pick up the cane
Restore the sheen of cross again!

Will the Burak return again?
Will the Ghat flood again?
Will the monk still ordain?
Will the tramps wait again?

Thursday, June 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: flood,fathers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sourav Kumar 28 June 2018

Very Good poem sir full of emotions and describing a situation here with a person touch

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#anuj roy 28 June 2018

Nice Hope u will take ur poetry to its right destination..

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Aarzoo Mehek 30 June 2018

No words to express my grief for the lost heritage. but time will come when the realization dawns and things will be rectified before its too late. Beautiful poem Naqui.10++++

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NAQUI AHMAD JOHN 30 June 2018

Many thanks for finding time to read.Your generous appreciation encourages.☺

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Shaysta nasreen 29 June 2018

Very well expressed , thought provoking , good job.

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Chinedu Dike 28 June 2018

Poignant rendition embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful creation written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing Naqui.

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Ambika 28 June 2018

A thought provoking poem. I loved the images and allusions.Use of anaphora is brilliant.

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Narcisus17 28 June 2018

A thought provoking poem. I loved the images and allusions.Use of anaphora is brilliant. RN Tagore, T.S.Eliot, Salman Rushdie, Samuel Beckett, R.K.Narayan, Premchand, Jawaharlal Nehru etc have been alluded innovatively. It is a poignant take on the current socio-political conditions of India. Kudos to the poet

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