Thursday, October 29, 2015

The Journey Comments

Rating: 5.0

A journey has just begun
Sailing the seas of trust and betrayal
To find a treasure long been lost and gone
I'd have to sail through friendship, depression, hate and self-denial
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Chinedu Dike 13 November 2015

Beautiful and very romantic. I guess the voyage to find the treasure and bliss of true is one that's fraught with stumbling blocks. A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Wilfred. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Babatunde Aremu 29 October 2015

Nice poem, talking of risk the migrants faced. This is similar to my poem: 'Weird Adventure'.Thanks for sharing

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2015

Journey of life wonderfully begins with friendship shared here with wise motive. Interesting sharing...10

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