The Key Poem by R.Benjamin Abate

The Key



In High School,
We always met
Outside of her
Pottery class-

She said
She was working
On Something
For Me-

Then, one day,
She came out with
This thing in her hands
& She said,

'This is the Key to My Heart, I want You to have It.'

She handed me the key
& I dropped it immediately-
It broke into pieces
All over the floor-

Her jaw dropped-
People stared
& She was speechless-
I felt sick.

We picked up
The pieces
& Glued them
Back together

But it
Was never
The same
& We Knew.

Saturday, March 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is based on a true story about my high school sweetheart.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 29 March 2015

A unique poem that signifies an irrepairable crack in a relationship and how u creatively related it to the cracked vase. So it ends in a wry wistful way but I just take note of the great narrative and poetic skill with which u crafted it from real life. Thumbs up. Great to read u again.

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