Saturday, March 30, 2019

The Killer Comments

Rating: 5.0

They cut me piece by piece
Like I am a lump of meat
They use sharp cutter so that
I may not know when I get cut
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 April 2019

This poem is A most precious NOTE of great importance and a keen philosophy about life that has not been lived with honesty as you have mentioned that in your last stanza. I cite that here a few lines: It is the end of a life A life half lived with honesty An excellent poem about a life led in a dishonest way. I admire the moral in this ompressing poem. Thank you for sharing. A 10+++++++++++++++ for the Vote.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 April 2019

small error, must be IMpressing, thank you.

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 April 2019

Greatly inspired by your awesome comment Sylvia. Thanks for rating 10++++..... Regards.

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