The Killer Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

The Killer

Rating: 5.0


They cut me piece by piece
Like I am a lump of meat
They use sharp cutter so that
I may not know when I get cut

They drink my blood as if I
Am a sweet spring of summer
They do it slowly so that I
May not feel dry all of a sudden

I am going to die I know
My eyes are half closed and
I can feel the sharp edge of
Steel running through my heart

It is the end of a life
A life half lived with honesty
But they have their own rules
Obey or die no second choice

Saturday, March 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: blood,terror
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 12 April 2019

This poem is A most precious NOTE of great importance and a keen philosophy about life that has not been lived with honesty as you have mentioned that in your last stanza. I cite that here a few lines: It is the end of a life A life half lived with honesty An excellent poem about a life led in a dishonest way. I admire the moral in this ompressing poem. Thank you for sharing. A 10+++++++++++++++ for the Vote.

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 April 2019

Greatly inspired by your awesome comment Sylvia. Thanks for rating 10++++..... Regards.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 April 2019

small error, must be IMpressing, thank you.

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