The Kites Comments

I like it. Even though, it's short, I like it. :)

On a summer day a boy fly his dream together with his kite and watch them high to touch the sky On a summer day a lil boy cry saw his kite falling down to reach blue sky his dream cant get but the boy tries again what a spirit, of a boy we have to learn On a summer day_Unwritten SOul

I like the imagery of this haiku.Only three lines but it sets a nice scene of childhood. Well done.