I saw her in the garden
When the sun was about to
Split the clouds and fall on
The steady water of the pond
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(1) This is a beautiful poem, but with a sad end. Probably the neighbour who passed away and when you see the beautiful newly emerged flowers in her garden, your thoughts go back to that moment. You heard her die.
Your beautiful comments always inspire me Sylvia. Thanks for reading, comment and rating.
The Lady And the song sounded as sweet despite her old age.... lovely.
A beautifully decked poem with a garden-full of flowers
A lovely poem...brilliantly drafted...well dressed! I love your expression and the style of your penning....10
(2) May she rest in peace and I hope you will soon have new neighbors. If this is invented because you like to write poems, your thoughts are very lively artistic, I can not say otherwise, my sincere compliments for this tragic poem. But IF you'll ask me, this occurred truly. A magnificent poem, Anil.10. This is so very heart touching. Thank you for sharing.