The Last Journey Poem by me poet yeps poet

The Last Journey

Rating: 5.0


As life flows like a river
the banks also give way.
no boats man comes even closer
as much as to share
a minuscule hand with care

Life gradually surges on
the speed of the heart hastens
is the estuary yet far away
someone say
mind beckons

the river of love hastens
to merge with its mom ocean
do they submerge tonight
let us see
it never happens

Monday, March 8, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: poem,travel,death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
FINAL TRIP OF LIFE
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 08 March 2021

They merge but never submerge. This is beautiful one. You penned it well. Good metaphorical poetic journey of life.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 March 2021

and as The Holy Bible says dear Poet, Man PROPOSESs, but GOD DISPOSES, HE is constantly right.BUT this is an amazing poem!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 March 2021

A Most beautiful poem! 5 Stars!

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me poet yeps poet 09 March 2021

PPME SURVIVED TO THANK THE P H WOMEN OF POETIC SUBSTANCE THANKS

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 09 March 2021

Dear Poet, As always a philosophical poem. Only time can tell the final call and journey.5 stars

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 09 March 2021

The last journey flows like a river- the river of love joining and merging with the Mother Ocean.

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