Tuesday, July 7, 2015

The Last Of Your Time Comments

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Why so serious?
Where's the daily laughter?
Remembering the childhood happily ever after.
The images wash over you in this waking dream.
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Roseann Shawiak 25 July 2015

Being numb and feeling nothing helps us to get through loss and emotional turmoil, it's an unending struggle to be sure, a battle we never really win, yet fight it constantly, having only an impoverished existence to show for it. Your poem is filled with the truth of life's uncertainty and doubt, amazingly honest and straightforward! Truly a poignant message to all. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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