The Life Poem by Soumya Ranjan Rout

The Life

Rating: 4.2


The life is full of sorrows,

When kith and kins are in danger,

All are praying God,

For life to sustain longer.



When we face any problem,

He stands with us.

We solve that easily,

With a strong focus.

Thursday, October 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: danger,god,life,lifestyle,prayer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

Life is perceptional and this is full of danger and sorrow. No one likes sufferings. All pray before God to recover them from obstacles and pain. God by his mercy removes our sorrows. An amazing and wisely drafted poem this is...10

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 21 October 2017

Yes you are right any one doesn't want to suffer so all are praying God for recoverbecause every one want to a happy life not a sad life.Thank you poet

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Suratha Kumar Rout 08 September 2019

A beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. 10+++

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 29 October 2018

LIFE IS SHORTLIVED. SO YOU BELIEVE IN YOUR LIFE.

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 15 December 2017

With different looks, That's more memorable, this line is so fantastic 10+++++

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Susan Williams 27 November 2017

That first stanza spoke very strongly to me and, I'm sure, others. The only way to get through those days, months, years is to receive sustenance and strength from God. Well thought out, Soumya. And welcome to PoemHunters.

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 01 December 2017

Thank you Susan for your nice remark

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Rajendra Rout 03 November 2017

it was a lovely poem.thanks for shairing this poem....10+++

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 04 November 2017

Thank you for your excellent comment

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