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The Life Turned Sour!

The life turned sour!
avoiding a bleak past i abhor
i stroll to the beach; swam ashore
the life turned sour!
my days filled with anger and pain
the sun’s warmth beginning to wane
thunderstorms and ferocious rain.
The life turned sour!
looking at the moon distant and pale
like it is willing to cry and wail.

Of these pitiful sights
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Unwritten Soul 10 June 2013

If life turn sour, add some sweetness into it...dont be sad over the plate, change what you have now..sure you still can taste better life, and only you can manage to fit your taste...so come on, dont feel bad..do try to be better.. nice adrenalin poem, keep it up Aziz_Soul

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 June 2013

Poignant but a poem in great fine metaphor! Wow! I hope u read mine too.

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Gajanan Mishra 08 June 2013

very good poem ' life turned sour thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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