The Lonely Track Poem by Terry Finch

The Lonely Track

Rating: 5.0


I walked along a lonely track,
my eye upon the end.
A cold wind blowing at my back,
hard times my only friend.

The journey chosen, always rough,
just couldn't get it right;
and all the jobs I'd had were tough,
the work was seldom light.

I never caught the train of wealth,
it never slowed for me.
It always came and left in stealth
and rich I shall not be.

So here I am and here to stay,
life cannot keep me down.
It's funny how life works that way,
' You either swim or drown. '

But somehow things can still work out,
strong will, I do not lack;
and I shall come without a doubt
to the end of this old track.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Harris 24 February 2009

This is a very well written poem, Terry, one that has an undercurrent of failure, frustration, sorrow, and even hope, but is not unbowed because of the fate which has befallen the protagonist. He keeps moving towards that distant goal with no thought of turning back. The hope emerges in that final verse which is a very fitting conclusion to this fine poem. You have shown a great talent for poetic expression in this moving and outstanding poem. Carl.

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