The Loser.. Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

The Loser..



When you try to bend me,
I tend to be too flexible,
Not to feel the pain of squeeze,
When you try to break me,
I say goodbye to my solid state,
Make myself to be malleable,
Not interested in shattered hearts,
When you try to bounce me as a ball,
I may gain extra weight,
not to be lifted up,
Strained are your healthy hands,
All these are not my faults.

Wednesday, December 11, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: goodbye
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Izuoma Ibe Owunna 12 December 2013

Wow! Natural....... but men like it tasking

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Babatunde Aremu 12 December 2013

A man for all season. Its good not to be rigid. But becareful not to be tossed up and down. Nice job.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 December 2013

Right amounts of flexibility, malleability, and elasiticity are desirable in a person. Characteristics nicely described.

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