The Loser.. Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

The Loser..



When you try to bend me,
I tend to be too flexible,
Not to feel the pain of squeeze,
When you try to break me,
I say goodbye to my solid state,
Make myself to be malleable,
Not interested in shattered hearts,
When you try to bounce me as a ball,
I may gain extra weight,
not to be lifted up,
Strained are your healthy hands,
All these are not my faults.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Izuoma Ibe Owunna 12 December 2013

Wow! Natural....... but men like it tasking

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Babatunde Aremu 12 December 2013

A man for all season. Its good not to be rigid. But becareful not to be tossed up and down. Nice job.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 December 2013

Right amounts of flexibility, malleability, and elasiticity are desirable in a person. Characteristics nicely described.

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