The Loss Of My Sister Poem by Sharon Reniff

The Loss Of My Sister



I wish there were words I can say
what I feel from day to day
Nobody knows what I'd do
For abother moment with you

I remember your smile
it would keep me going an extra mile
I remember all the great time we shared
cause your the one who truly cared

You said you'd always be there
now your gone, its just not fair!
Why did you take your life
only memories are left to remember you by.

I would give anything to have you back
without you my life has been a wreck
I wish there was a way to fill this empty space
But no one could take your place!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unknown 18 May 2018

I love this poem. It holds so much feeling in it. You are such a good poem writer I lost my sister, but not to death she choose willingly to go, I understand the pain you feel and I am so sorry about it, you don't know me, yes, but it dose not mean I cant give you my sympathy one saying I like is live on, grow strong, and move on maybe this will help.

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Sara Beloved 27 July 2009

A very well written poem.

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Milica Franchi De Luri 27 July 2009

This is sad poem, but very well written, in stanzas and rhymes- my favorite style, Milica

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