The Lost In Touch Poem by Randy Bolante Jr

The Lost In Touch

Rating: 5.0


Lowering my eyes in these Wondry hills
I loathe myself in lies
Seeing a dark tree and a plain surroundings
I feel myself thinking

Letters, Letters! Were O those awesome words
that you sweet girl tried throw me these summer curse?

Realizing your vivid tender curl
as soft silent noise occurs
a voice will speaks so whole

'When did I comprehend you?
why do i miss you?
Steel my heart is,
It melts in the sights of you
Live or die, come what may'
Then I'll say

I miss you amidst this air kiss
while I'm in my fantasizing dreading wish.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Randy, a truly heartfelt poem. You have written so sensitively and beautifully. 10 Karin Anderson

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Priyanka Bhowmick 27 May 2009

lovely composition. wonderful imagination 10++

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Ency Bearis 27 May 2009

interesting write...well expressed...great piece....10

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James Mclain 27 May 2009

to lie awake on her soft cotton cloud, drifting in and out of her soft pink mouth..well you found her..you do the work...nice write...iip

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LOVEFOOL Aka 27 May 2009

Wonderful well written poetry 10+++

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