Monday, May 3, 2010

The Love Story Continues

Rating: 4.5
I have a Relationship.
I fight
with Arrows of Blame,
with Stings of Criticism,
with the Storm of Arguments,
with the Charge of Anger,
with the Phantom of Suspicion,
under the Weight of Ego,
for Self-centered Ends,
to score a Point,
on False Assumptions,
on Confused Notions,
with Pangs of Possessiveness,
with the Mentality only to take.

Never mind what I get,
I continue.
And the Fallacy of Love continues.
This is I. This is me.
I can’t bend means I can’t.

I have a relationship.
Instead, I care
to Understand,
to Listen,
to Love,
to Trust,
to Give,
to Converge,
to Share,
to Devote,
to Surrender,
to Care,
to Lighten up,
to Count my Blessings.

Never mind what I get,
I continue.
And the Love Story continues.
This is I, the Humble Me.
Love is Life, only Love I can.

The Relationship has to make sense,
and from the two options I see
what I choose,
makes all the difference-
makes it fallacy or fact!

Thus how I approach it,
decides what I make from it.

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Amrit Rathi
Emma Adamyan 08 June 2010
quite and smart lines and... the love story continues..
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Tomy Pop 26 May 2010
very great contrasts of a good and a bad relationship. thank you for sharing.
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Preetam Shetty 13 May 2010
Love is eternity
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o, has to continue...
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C. P. Sharma 08 May 2010
Beautiful thought provoking poem. Life swings between love and hate. The choice is ours. Thanks for sharing. CP
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Valery Atkinson 08 May 2010
[The Relationship. It depends How I approach it. It depends What I make Out of it..] Well said.....What a contrast! One way we can make the realtionship Hell, otherway, it's all the way a Love Story. A poem with Great Insight!
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Sachin Danehalli 08 May 2010
nice way to connect the past and present..Love changes all..Nice poem: -)
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Mukul Chaudhari 05 May 2010
For the Self-centered Ends The paradox which this line holds is very subtle. Very nice.
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Anjali Sinha 04 May 2010
wowwwwwwwww nice-a right approach to life good poem --
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