Amrit Rathi


The Love Story Continues - Poem by Amrit Rathi

I have a Relationship.
I fight
with Arrows of Blame,
with Stings of Criticism,
with the Storm of Arguments,
with the Charge of Anger,
with the Phantom of Suspicion,
under the Weight of Ego,
for Self-centered Ends,
to score a Point,
on False Assumptions,
on Confused Notions,
with Pangs of Possessiveness,
with the Mentality only to take.

Never mind what I get,
I continue.
And the Fallacy of Love continues.
This is I. This is me.
I can’t bend means I can’t.

I have a relationship.
Instead, I care
to Understand,
to Listen,
to Love,
to Trust,
to Give,
to Converge,
to Share,
to Devote,
to Surrender,
to Care,
to Lighten up,
to Count my Blessings.

Never mind what I get,
I continue.
And the Love Story continues.
This is I, the Humble Me.
Love is Life, only Love I can.

The Relationship has to make sense,
and from the two options I see
what I choose,
makes all the difference-
makes it fallacy or fact!

Thus how I approach it,
decides what I make from it.

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Comments about The Love Story Continues by Amrit Rathi

  • Emma Adamyan (6/8/2010 1:31:00 PM)


    quite and smart lines and... the love story continues.. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/26/2010 2:52:00 AM)


    very great contrasts of a good and a bad relationship. thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (5/13/2010 11:50:00 AM)


    Love continues....love is eternity (Report) Reply

  • (5/10/2010 10:15:00 AM)


    o, yeah...it has to continue... (Report) Reply

  • (5/8/2010 11:33:00 PM)


    Philosophy in a nutshell....loved it absolutely! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • C. P. Sharma (5/8/2010 10:12:00 PM)


    Beautiful thought provoking poem. Life swings between love and hate. The choice is ours.
    Thanks for sharing.
    CP
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  • (5/8/2010 7:27:00 AM)


    [The Relationship.
    It depends
    How I approach it.
    It depends
    What I make
    Out of it..]
    Well said.....What a contrast! One way we can make the realtionship Hell, otherway, it's all the way a Love Story. A poem with Great Insight!
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  • (5/8/2010 5:47:00 AM)


    nice way to connect the past and present..Love changes all..Nice poem: -) (Report) Reply

  • (5/5/2010 3:03:00 AM)


    For the Self-centered Ends

    The paradox which this line holds is very subtle. Very nice.
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  • (5/4/2010 8:27:00 AM)


    wowwwwwwwww
    nice-a right approach to life
    good poem --
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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 3, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 14, 2010


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