Have u ever been in love?
makes u vulnerable, like the kites above.
open ur chest and opens up ur heart,
allowing to mess up, in ways absurd.
U build up all defenses,
u build up a suit of armor,
To no use it is,
it creeps like a burgular.
The stupid u, the stupid one
wanders into ur stupid world,
And u give them a piece of u,
for which they never asked.
And then one day something
stupid happens,
A kiss, a touch, a smile,
renders u hapless.
And then ur life is
not yours anymore,
confusion, dillema, sleeplessness
outpour.
And then she sends
'may be we should b friends'
leaves u sulking, bemoaning'
and everything ends.
flawless is the word amazing.. where had all this been hidden for so long.. well u are a spark dear... god bless love: prashant
A good account of adolescent love. So many of our young men go through this phase. I liked your description of love as a kite.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nicely penned good poem