Friday, October 30, 2009

The Mango Comments

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Hidden in the branches,
From the heat of day,
Relaxed I lay.
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Shrutika Nagpal
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Deodath Debideen 31 October 2009

I love mangoes! Sorry if you ended up as juice!

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Meera J 30 October 2009

Dear shruthika, your poem is simple and subtle.keep writing. from a budding poet.

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Indira Renganathan 30 October 2009

Sounds your age....yet fresh and juicy....congrats...and thank you

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