Phil Soar

Gold Star - 47,787 Points (28.06.1952)

The Message - Poem by Phil Soar

A simple few lines
written through buckets of tears
expressing such deep raw emotions
that had been building up for some years

Left only with no other reason
she wrote all her feelings, and then
she tore up the paper she wrote on
and started the letter again

How easy this story was yesterday
when the feeling rose up from the heart
how hard it was now to complete it
without tearing someone apart

So she wrote down the words with emotion
as the tear stains drew lines on her face
she could not help how it was now ending
that this love would be hard to replace

As she finished the letter she lied
the world wasn't going to end
and the line that she wrote wasn't truthful
she hoped he could still be her friend

Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain


Comments about The Message by Phil Soar

  • Kelly Kurt (3/25/2015 4:30:00 PM)


    A very familiar story to many. Thank you for sharing it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 25, 2015



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