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Open My Heart

Rating: 4.5

Open my heart
Your name engraved there
Deep amongst the valves and mechanisms
Like something carved in oak
Upon That tree

The vision evokes
How much you mean to me

You're locked inside a prism

With a beautiful light
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Monday, December 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Uzefa Rashida M.a 26 February 2016

Deep passionate feeling of true love and the highest place a lover could give to his beloved is in his heart. Lovely lines great writ

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Roseann Shawiak 28 June 2015

Gentle and beautiful poem blending your love within your heart like the carving of it on an oak tree. Loved the imagery it struck a chord within me. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Ging Taping 16 June 2015

Friends and love truly blend. Nice flows thanks for sharing with us..

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Rajnish Manga 08 December 2014

Enjoyed reading this poem which flows right from the heart of a true lover.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 December 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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