Thursday, September 15, 2016

The Milky Way Comments

Rating: 5.0

We took a car
And drove away afar,
Accidentally reached a place
Where brilliantly shone the stars.
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Rajesh Thankappan
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COMMENTS
Hans Vr 22 September 2016

Like it how you capture the moment in wonderful words

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Mihaela Pirjol 16 September 2016

Beautiful celestial imagery, an ethereal feeling of floating, and a great last line. I very much enjoyed reading this poem.

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