-Haiku- 1
-The Moon-
The Moon is in the sky gorgeous gloom,
It looks the earth with Swerving servitude,
The Moon in the Mind looks beyond blink.
A normal HAIKU has 17 words or 5 7 5 syllables in 3 lines kindly correct me i rarely compose Haikus Have you ever heard of SUNKUS two words three words four words in three lines....
I want to write with three line stanza....ssyllable and stanzas will vary...
Yes you are right..it is of 17 stanzas...I want to maintain only three stanza..it is not definite rhyme pattern..I want to creat my own haiku...
A beautifully crafted haiku dealing with the moon as also the moon in the mind. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The Moon is in the sky gorgeous gloom, It looks the earth with Swerving servitude, The Moon in the Mind looks beyond blink