The Moon Poem by Prabir Gayen

The Moon

Rating: 4.5


-Haiku- 1
-The Moon-

The Moon is in the sky gorgeous gloom,
It looks the earth with Swerving servitude,
The Moon in the Mind looks beyond blink.

Saturday, November 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabir Gayen 06 June 2020

The Moon is in the sky gorgeous gloom, It looks the earth with Swerving servitude, The Moon in the Mind looks beyond blink

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Srijita Mondal 26 November 2018

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 November 2018

A normal HAIKU has 17 words or 5 7 5 syllables in 3 lines kindly correct me i rarely compose Haikus Have you ever heard of SUNKUS two words three words four words in three lines....

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Prabir Gayen 25 November 2018

I want to write with three line stanza....ssyllable and stanzas will vary...

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Prabir Gayen 25 November 2018

Yes you are right..it is of 17 stanzas...I want to maintain only three stanza..it is not definite rhyme pattern..I want to creat my own haiku...

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Ratnakar Mandlik 24 November 2018

A beautifully crafted haiku dealing with the moon as also the moon in the mind. Thanks for sharing.

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Prabir Gayen 26 November 2018

Thanks....................

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