The Moon And The Sun Poem by Ianne de Angel

The Moon And The Sun

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I'm sure about my pain
It locked me inside again
It doesn't care if you're happy
If you're white or nasty
It just end all this in rain...

Once upon a time
There was two lovers
The sun and the moon
They wanted be together
Get more and more closer
Each one as a lover
Never expected that love could end so soon...

Cold but pure
The moon has in sure
It loves it darling sun
Hot and strong
The sun never thought it was wrong
It wanted them as one

But God knew what he was doing
He never meant to see moon crying
He just waited for something better

The moon is the night
The sun is day's light
Each one in love
Something really above

We know they can't be together
But their love will last forever
And that's why exist the rain
And the snow
For some day, they don't show
They'll find one each other
In a kiss, after so much miss
Their love is like this
Away but near
Both in a tear
A fragment of the universe

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 04 December 2008

Beautiful words Ianne...well written poem...thanks for sharing this with us...Fi

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Jennifer Westergren 04 December 2008

Lovely, touched my heart.

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May Namoc 04 December 2008

beautiful poem. great story telling. this was a beautiful vivid piece and i loved it. i grant it a ten. great job my friend. bravo to you and keep on writing too.^^ May

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Ianne de Angel

Ianne de Angel

São Paulo, Brazil
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