The darkness that creeps across my room
The shadows that dance and play in the gloom
I dread the thought of me seeing tomorrow
My heart is filled with pain and bitter sorrow
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There is sadness and a feeling of depression in the lines. Nicely composed though. Keep inking.
I have long felt that writing is therapeutic. Please keep writing. Thanks, BlakenyRose
''It's one of the few poems that I've ever actually finished. I found this folded up in my diary. I'm only posting it so i can get rid of it.'' we can't get rid of our poems.. never.. ;) keep writing, Rose! Ciao dall'Italia Fabrizio