The Mountain And Me Poem by Vin Talukar

The Mountain And Me

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Dunes, keep getting steep,
Stings ready to strike, the scorpions keep,
Sand, pierced in my eyes deep,
Into my soul,  
the deserts creep.

Through the deserts, as I walk,
Memories haunt and dreams mock,
I flee and run till I hit a rock,
But my own shadows,
Don't stop their stalk.

I scream and yell,
But there's no one to tell,
I run and run, breaking my shell,
Hungry, thirsty and fatigued,
Lost my senses, I fell.

Cold, the night I pass,
Sun rose, peeping through grass,
Monstrous trees, my sight can't pass,
Into the woods,  
I now, trespass. 

Trees, welcome, they said,
Trees, comfort they made,
Trees, sorrows they fade,
For many a moons,
In their bosom, my heart I laid.

A voice I could hear,  
"Why aren't you here? "
Sand stricken eyes, the sight was mere,
Monstrous trees,
My vision couldn't tear.

I could sense,
It's omnipresence,  
Invisible, to my vision's fence,
Hard I try,
But the monstrous trees are dense.

Stood there, in wonder,
"Who was the voice? ", I ponder,
In anger the land slid, my feet under,
Down I tumble for miles,
With monstrous trees lumber.

The slopes transform into a plain,  
Tumbling halts, eyes clear in the rain,
I had become a swain,
My eyes could see,
The magnificent mountain.

It was the mountain, that spoke to me,
Always there, but I could never see,
Oh mountain, as I gaze at thee,
I realise,
Even you had expectations from me.

Monday, March 18, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 19 March 2019

Well articulated and elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing, Vin.

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Susan Williams 19 March 2019

I love story poems! ! ! Good imagination. Looking forward to reading more from you

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Kim Barney 19 March 2019

A fascinating read, Vin. I interpret it as a nightmare. I'm glad you woke up! Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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