The Mysterious Life Of Ourselves Poem by Laura arwen

The Mysterious Life Of Ourselves



The soul has
got a life
that we don't
know
This song is
appreciable from artists
and from honest
people
The stupid people
want to return
famous the advantages
of the privacy
The scientists have discovered
that the life is
a precious darling
because it reserves
wonderful mysteries
We create ourselves
alone because the
life must be
secret and mysterious
It's horrible to
think that this
song is an
imminent menace
The unknown artists
appreciate the mysteries
because they understand
the real life
This song is
a bomb for
the jesters
The life is
a mystery
It is a
fortune if the
life is mysterious
Sometimes this song
has got a
premonitory dream
This song doesn't
accept the sound
people
I'm jealous if
someone wants
to
know the life's
confidentiality
The mysterious life
of ourselves is
a strong composition
Only the combatants
are proud of
their life because
it must be
codified
Its justice is
the own instinct
and the coscience

Sunday, March 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 19 March 2017

This is exactly what I referred in, my earlier comment - your poetic mind in this poem has ordered all the amorphous energy under categories of images and the images contain the energy eloquently. This is a dance of potential. Only one thing and you can ignore this if you want. The poem goes on too long. You make your point with such vivid imagery for 20 + lines, our heads are spinning with these images - STOP - let us live with these images, process them, re-read the poem. Especially re-read the poem to strengthen the experience you've given us. IT'S VISIONARY.

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