The Immortality Poem by Laura arwen

The Immortality

Rating: 4.3


Immortality is charming
and magical
I believe that
immortality is a
special gift that
only few have
Immortality is rarely
granted because it
is dangerous to abuse
Only some people
are predestinated to
have immortality
For someone immortality
is misery for
someone else is salvation
Immortality is a
sweet and hot secret
Do not mess
with the immortality
of the soul
because it definitely hurts
Immortality is sacred
and majestic
The immortal has
a vast knowledge available
Immortality is like
a wild, joyous,
bright and peaceful light
Immortality is not
a gam
It is not
unnatural to be
immortal
Immortality is illuminated
by myriads of
colored stars
I dream of immortality

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 02 November 2018

sweet and hot secret Do not mess with the immortality...a wild, joyous, bright and peaceful light... thank u very very much for your meditation on immoratality. thank u again, this is a fine poem, .. thank u. tony of the soul

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Khairul Ahsan 20 May 2016

'Only some people are predestinated to have immortality' - True!

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Dougie Fresh 04 June 2012

I really liked the flow! nice work

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Laura Arwen 01 April 2016

Thank you

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