The Nature's Call Poem by Piyush Sharma

The Nature's Call

Rating: 5.0


Last night I met all my friends so dear
We played cards and drank a lot of beer.

Together with friends, what a wonderful day.
We were all stag, and happy and GAY.

In the ocean of pleasure we wanted to dive
So we kept drinking and went for a long drive.

The excessive beer started knocking on our belly
we needed to ease, I might sound so silly.

The car soon stopped at a dark secluded place
I checked if there wasn’t anyone, just in case.

There were trees, bushes, flowers and high grass all around
No human, a few insects making some musical sound.

Away from the civilized world, all creatures were at ease
No stock markets, no terrorism to disturb their peace

The full moon was shining and emitting bright light
Now we all were holding our bellies with all our might.

The sweet fragrance of the jungle flowers was in the air
We humans had disturbed the forest, I felt it wasn't fair.

The recent rains had made the whole place alive
It seemed the ecosystem was watching us all five.

Very quickly we found a tree so tall
We went beneath it, and did our job.
Friends, it was just a Nature’s call.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 25 July 2009

hey natures call nice hilarious one...... you made me laugh all the way -10 anjali

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Siddharth Singh 26 July 2009

Absolutely fabulous. Never before has a tongue in cheek humour been written with such finesse and artistry. I can only sit back and admire.

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Musical Notes 27 July 2009

great work mate...very interesting read could imagine the scenerio as I read along... maja aa gaya....

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Sarwar Chowdhury 31 August 2009

Ammmmmazing work out! fine words chosen! 10+

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there is a poet in me! 26 August 2009

very nice.... very different... very well written....

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Preeti Chauhan 18 August 2009

Absolutely hilarious and funny, never before reading about nature's call was so enjoyable...waiting for more

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Surya . 29 July 2009

really a diffrent poem.interesting. voted10 surya

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Deborah Cromer 29 July 2009

Nice use of words to describe moments. Writing about experiences in life is just part of poetry. DC

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