The Naughty Planet Poem by Binayakumar Mohanty

The Naughty Planet

Rating: 5.0


It never moves reverse
even you hang me till death.
Why sir so
I am ready to lie
billion times
for I want to live
for me it is so important
only important I know so far.

The earth moves neverthless
I lie or not who cares for!
You take away all the blood
I have in my veins
stop the spike in my brain
You fool, the naughty truth
sees none, listens none.

Tuesday, December 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: truth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ansuman Srichetak 27 October 2018

You fool the naughty truth sees None listens none.Nicely crafted poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 26 December 2017

Yes...ss...You have done the trick. An unparalleled stream of thought sets her feet on this Earth to speak on behalf of the Galileos who are yet to be summoned. Nice try Sir. 10+++++++

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Binayakumar Mohanty 27 December 2017

Thanks sir for a deeper bath in the poem

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 December 2017

Binaya, such an interesting write...10++++++

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Binayakumar Mohanty 27 December 2017

Thanks for nice. Comments

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