The Night Speaks To Me Poem by Lora Colon

The Night Speaks To Me

Rating: 5.0


The night speaks to me, it says 'Lorraine,
Remove the lock from the door;
It's time to escape, time to run free,
This is what darkness is for

All that praying, what good has it done?
You spend too much time on your knees;
You know there's no answer to your prayers,
Enough of the 'Please, dear God, please! '

And the night speaks to me so gently,
It thinks it knows me so well;
It says things just to make me reveal
The secrets I'd rather not tell

But I want to listen to the night,
There's a luscious sweetness in its tone;
It holds me in its careless grasp,
Then releases me when we're alone

The night tells me not to trust the day,
It warns me not to talk to the light;
Light can't keep a secret, you know,
It will undo the work of the night

And I want the night to go on and on,
I'm so comfortable in its embrace;
I'll stay with the night, I'll live in the dark,
The day is just too hard to face

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Brown 21 January 2014

This has the feel of an Edgar Allan Poe piece. Melancholy, but well written. Don't give away all your secrets though Lora.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 13 January 2014

Added a new dimension to the night here Lora and the day too presenting a truth gripping and real. It's not just fantasy but real heart-speak.

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Joseph Anderson 11 January 2014

A splendidly penned poem, but a troubling approach to life.Come on out and maybe your cares and fears will fade. Great use of metaphors

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Lora Colon

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Missouri - United States
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