Crimson Soul

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The Noose - Poem by Crimson Soul

I Am Hanging by a Noose,
Slowly Bleeding, Slowly loose,
I see Crimson, Rivers run free

Through the desert, and through the trees;
I am Lost, Forevermore,
in my Mind, that foreswore;
In My Nightmare, I Am Blind,
Losing Myself, In this chime;

Dont Tell me there is a Light,
All I see is Crimson Might;
Bleeding Me Dry, Hugging My skin,
Wringing me cold, outing my Sins;
All I See and all I Know,
Is This Little Crimson Show;

By The noose, i look down

see the ground, so unsound,
Life Is Gone, Life Is Cold,
Life is Heartless, Life is Bold;
The Noose by the tree, watches me...

Scarlet Blood,
leaving Me;
The Noose has Seen,
The Noose Has Known,
All I Am,
and all I Own;
Nothing Matters, No-One Cares,
Ignore my Pleas, Ignore My Cares;

Look at the Noose by the tree,
And Wonder Why,
It Came To Be.....

Comments about The Noose by Crimson Soul

  • Crimson Soul (4/9/2012 7:16:00 PM)

    -I Might Do Do That- Asking People To Read Something Of Mine Seems Like A Good Way Of Getting Better Suggestions...(Thank You :) (Report) Reply

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  • <font color=00FFCC>teal Sky</font> (4/8/2012 10:15:00 PM)

    more people deserve to read your poems, there are many veterans out here who have written great poems.ask some of them to read your poems, they will never disappoint you, your work is good (read; it's crying to be read) (Report) Reply

  • <font color=00FFCC>teal Sky</font> (1/27/2012 7:20:00 AM)

    All I Am,
    and all I Own;
    Nothing Matters, No-One Cares,
    Ignore my Pleas, Ignore My Cares;
    my favorite line from this poem, great rhythm.
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  • Victor Ondieki (1/26/2012 10:48:00 PM)

    so musical... you employed your rhythm so effectively.10 (Report) Reply

  • (1/26/2012 10:30:00 PM)

    i really enjoyed this poem - really loved the way it moved - Great job! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 26, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, January 27, 2012

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