The Odour Poem by Joshua Adeyemi

The Odour

Rating: 5.0


The odour flew past
Different heads, soaring very fast:
Dodging the buildings and
Poles which did have their stand
In the heart of the earth.

Now you see its death:
As she made her to where men cluster,
She stayed awhile, not moving yonder,
Till her strength did fail,
And for her funeral all did wail.
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Commentary:
This is an effort to lay emphasis on how odour of substance travel all around, lurk where people are and dies there.

Sunday, April 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: buildings,funeral,nature,travel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 01 April 2018

Adeyemi, such a good write.....10++++++

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