The Offer Poem by M Rene Riel

The Offer

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as dusk lingers with it's offer
a welcomed silence, a tranquility
a sleep state hovers,

her bodily temple,
not to be still with death,
yet, their only touch

is in the solitude of the offer.
unseen, unheard whispers
travel through the essence of time,

their only keepsake
to their undying love are
dances unseen in the darkened sky

a facetious love frolics
in the depths of her soul
as dawn lingers with it's offer

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varanasi Ramabrahmam 29 August 2009

An offer described charmingly and gently with understanding.

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M Rene Riel

M Rene Riel

Plattsburgh New York USA
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